Friday 18 October 2019

Made up hunting

As I have the 223 on my back the magazine full of bullets the stags roaring as loud as can be. It echos through the valley. I think he is looking for hinds all of a sudden BOOM!!! There is another hunter in here so I load the gun. Footsteps getting closer and closer I hide up the bank a little bit it comes around. It’s one 16 pointer stag with 5 hinds with him. Line them up BOOM BOOM BOOM the stag and 2 hinds. Now I've got to gut them and get them out of here. What on earth 4 fallow following behind. I quickly but silently load the magazine in the gun, load now shoot I get three. That’s enough. I quickly gut them. I’m luckily on a track and the motorbike is 100 metres away so I run back to get it. Oh no I've come across a problem there isn’t going to be enough room. Oh well I can try and get them all on first the stag, next hinds it’s full. I’m going to have to put them in the passenger seat. There is not going to be enough room in the chiller so i’m going to have to put them in 2 chillers. That is going to be a lot of meat to cut up so I will have to get some help and they can have some of the meat.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora John. It's James from gisborne intermediate school.
    I really liked how lifelike your story was. I learnt about hunting etiquette as I have never gone hunting. Maybe you could divide your story into paragraphs to make it easier to read.

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